The other scene that I had to rethink about was
"You can wear terrible shirts and grow more fat"
Initially, I had her walking down the street and she went in a phonebooth. I was not able to justify why she entered the phone booth so I gave this sentence a rethink. So instead of her walking down the street, I have her crossing the street and I will exaggerate her actions when she crosses it. Since one of her attitude is that she cannot be bothered, I will have her slumberly crossing it.
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